Comments on: The Beginnings of a Story http://www.fatcyclist.com/2015/01/27/the-beginnings-of-a-story/ It's like reality TV. Except it's real. And there's no TV. Fri, 04 Mar 2022 03:21:11 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9 hourly 1 By: traildiva http://www.fatcyclist.com/2015/01/27/the-beginnings-of-a-story/comment-page-2/#comment-660363 traildiva Wed, 11 Feb 2015 18:20:44 +0000 http://www.fatcyclist.com/2015/01/27/the-beginnings-of-a-story/#comment-660363 One and three, please - they both sound like stories I'd really like to read! One and three, please – they both sound like stories I’d really like to read!

]]> By: NancyJBS http://www.fatcyclist.com/2015/01/27/the-beginnings-of-a-story/comment-page-2/#comment-659962 NancyJBS Thu, 05 Feb 2015 15:04:10 +0000 http://www.fatcyclist.com/2015/01/27/the-beginnings-of-a-story/#comment-659962 It’s tempting to fall for #1 because it’s the story line that is most fleshed out. Your style rings through because of that. Any story you tell is going to show us your style and talent, I believe. With complete confidence in your writing super power, I vote for #3. - See more at: http://www.fatcyclist.com/2015/01/27/the-beginnings-of-a-story/comment-page-2/#comment-659961 It’s tempting to fall for #1 because it’s the story line that is most fleshed out. Your style rings through because of that.

Any story you tell is going to show us your style and talent, I believe.

With complete confidence in your writing super power, I vote for #3.

- See more at: http://www.fatcyclist.com/2015/01/27/the-beginnings-of-a-story/comment-page-2/#comment-659961

]]> By: Anonymous http://www.fatcyclist.com/2015/01/27/the-beginnings-of-a-story/comment-page-2/#comment-659961 Anonymous Thu, 05 Feb 2015 15:00:31 +0000 http://www.fatcyclist.com/2015/01/27/the-beginnings-of-a-story/#comment-659961 It's tempting to fall for #1 because it's the story line that is most fleshed out. Your style rings through because of that. Any story you tell is going to show us your style and talent, I believe. With complete confidence in your writing super power, I vote for #3. It’s tempting to fall for #1 because it’s the story line that is most fleshed out. Your style rings through because of that.

Any story you tell is going to show us your style and talent, I believe.

With complete confidence in your writing super power, I vote for #3.

]]> By: pfonke http://www.fatcyclist.com/2015/01/27/the-beginnings-of-a-story/comment-page-2/#comment-659745 pfonke Mon, 02 Feb 2015 22:16:41 +0000 http://www.fatcyclist.com/2015/01/27/the-beginnings-of-a-story/#comment-659745 Number 1. I'm pretty sure I've already three and it was boring. Two makes me want to stop wasting time and get back to work. Number 1, I want to know what happens next. Number 1. I’m pretty sure I’ve already three and it was boring. Two makes me want to stop wasting time and get back to work. Number 1, I want to know what happens next.

]]> By: John http://www.fatcyclist.com/2015/01/27/the-beginnings-of-a-story/comment-page-2/#comment-659723 John Mon, 02 Feb 2015 10:35:49 +0000 http://www.fatcyclist.com/2015/01/27/the-beginnings-of-a-story/#comment-659723 Definitely number 3. Definitely number 3.

]]> By: Karin http://www.fatcyclist.com/2015/01/27/the-beginnings-of-a-story/comment-page-2/#comment-659718 Karin Mon, 02 Feb 2015 01:06:06 +0000 http://www.fatcyclist.com/2015/01/27/the-beginnings-of-a-story/#comment-659718 One or two. One or two.

]]> By: Aaron Davidson http://www.fatcyclist.com/2015/01/27/the-beginnings-of-a-story/comment-page-2/#comment-659713 Aaron Davidson Sun, 01 Feb 2015 18:06:45 +0000 http://www.fatcyclist.com/2015/01/27/the-beginnings-of-a-story/#comment-659713 Go with option #3! Go with option #3!

]]> By: Bob B. http://www.fatcyclist.com/2015/01/27/the-beginnings-of-a-story/comment-page-2/#comment-659669 Bob B. Sat, 31 Jan 2015 17:29:22 +0000 http://www.fatcyclist.com/2015/01/27/the-beginnings-of-a-story/#comment-659669 I had only six hours to deliver the message before the next attack of the Orkens. Should I take the Ibis Z-Works Niner or the Colnago 363 Singlespeed? Dammit, man, make a decision! The cyborgs could wipe out the entire town of Fruita! PROS The Ibis has a titanium frame that tracks well on descents... [to be continued] I had only six hours to deliver the message before the next attack of the Orkens. Should I take the Ibis Z-Works Niner or the Colnago 363 Singlespeed? Dammit, man, make a decision! The cyborgs could wipe out the entire town of Fruita!

PROS

The Ibis has a titanium frame that tracks well on descents…

[to be continued]

]]> By: Rydeordie http://www.fatcyclist.com/2015/01/27/the-beginnings-of-a-story/comment-page-2/#comment-659623 Rydeordie Fri, 30 Jan 2015 17:09:40 +0000 http://www.fatcyclist.com/2015/01/27/the-beginnings-of-a-story/#comment-659623 Of course the final condition of the dead guy's deal with satan is he has to change is name, to Larry Armstrong. Of course the final condition of the dead guy’s deal with satan is he has to change is name, to Larry Armstrong.

]]> By: Rydeordie http://www.fatcyclist.com/2015/01/27/the-beginnings-of-a-story/comment-page-2/#comment-659622 Rydeordie Fri, 30 Jan 2015 17:06:01 +0000 http://www.fatcyclist.com/2015/01/27/the-beginnings-of-a-story/#comment-659622 Well it must be nice to have the second part of the story tied in already. As we all know you, fatty, are a literary genius. I'm sure after writing the first story about the kokopelii trail, fans will clamor for a sequel, which,as previously propositioned, you will right about the dead guy in the heroin on a sysiphean quest. And finally the penultimate finale, book three about the deal the dead guy in heroin made with satan to return to this celestial plane and crush things with one or two testicles. Well it must be nice to have the second part of the story tied in already. As we all know you, fatty, are a literary genius. I’m sure after writing the first story about the kokopelii trail, fans will clamor for a sequel, which,as previously propositioned, you will right about the dead guy in the heroin on a sysiphean quest. And finally the penultimate finale, book three about the deal the dead guy in heroin made with satan to return to this celestial plane and crush things with one or two testicles.

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